Poor Imp

Oy, I'll get to that soon as I can, Sythe. ^_^ IMP

Hey Smor-- Oy, I have to admit that the first few lines made me quirk an eyebrow, so to speak. What bloody heck sort of moment. Ha, but from an ...

'Lo Jenna. ^_^ ...ah, I'll run it through, line by line at first--a few things in noticed that felt repetitions or awkward. “Mr. Benedict, are you up here?” Oh, Hell ...

Hello Spear Maiden, The literary forums are for your own work, not for other author's previously published work--no matter whether you give credit or not. If you'd edit this, and ...

Finished. (Though I'd still like to get to "Shift, Shape[...]" as well as the continuing chapters of Twooster's tale.) IMP

Hullo Thanatos-- Er, this doesn't actually belong in Fantasy Fiction. If you want to use emoticon to denote the content of your stories, the topic would be best placed in ...

Oy, my writing has done the same. It's not rare in any sense for me to feel bleak and inept--and sometimes, I haven't written merely because I'm certain it'll be ...

Hullo Twiggy. ^_^ Oy, no doubt it is very Dickinson--in its form inarguably, but as well as in the language and the simple contemplation. And in its similarity to Dickinson, ...

My dearest Sela, I think you've hit it. ^_^ Oy, there's always room for improvement, and you do linger on the second bit longer than is probably apt for balance. ...

Can you honestly justify using not-quite questions? ^_~

Hey Icaruss. ^_^ Oy, that was clever. And it makes perfect short fiction. The hint of something odd, with the way the first sentence begins keeps one interested in finding ...

Hullo again Wooster... Hopping to chapters two, mostly three. ...I'm afraid I was off, last critique. I hope it was helpful all the same, and not meandering or distracted. o0 ...

Would barbecue sauce really solve such an insoluble problem as the lack of complementarity of pepperoni on flower petals?

Do you think pepperoni would look go on either?

Have you ever seen a pizza bloom?